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Subject: The callout. 9/6/2012, 2:55 pm
[As the commentators are talking Jeff Hardy's music starts to play.]
King:Well isn't this a familiar face.We've already seen him today.
Cole:We have but it seems we're seeing him again.He must have something really important to say.
[Jeff Hardy comes out onto the stage and the crowd goes nuts.He continues going down to the ring and gets a mic before going into the ring.When he gets in he listens to the crowd's screams for a bit and then starts to speak.]
Hardy:Hello creatures of Chicago,Illinois!
[The crowd goes wild again.]
Hardy:Now normally you would only see me once on this show but this time is different.You will see me twice for a very important reason.
King:What is he talking about?
Cole:Who knows.
Hardy:Lets get straight to it shall we.I'm calling out someone right now.
[The crowd quiets down for a bit and lets Hardy speak.]
Hardy:Miz.Come on down here and join me in the ring.
[The crowd screams and Jeff waits for The Miz to come down and join him in the ring.]
(Open to The Miz.)
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/6/2012, 3:19 pm
Silence envelops the arena as an air of tension permeates through the crowd. Suddenly it is broken...
The Miz appears through the curtain and slowly walks to the ring. He is already in his ring gear.
Quote :
"Jeffrey Nero Hardy..."
He pauses to gauge the crowds reaction, which is mixed, before he begins to speak again.
Quote :
"I hope you have something good to say to me because I have a match soon."
The Miz says as he steps between the ropes. Confidence is pouring off of him as he stands opposite a former rival.
(Open for Jeff Hardy only)
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/9/2012, 3:28 pm
[A stare-down happens in the middle of the ring. The bell rings and the match starts. After the match The Miz celebrates his victory. Jeff gets up and grabs a mic.]
Hardy:Well done. After our big rivalry you still can beat me. But on RAW you will not get the same result. I garantee it!
[Hardy looks at The Miz and then at the crowd who are still amazing by the match they just saw. Hardy puts the mic back to his mouth.]
Hardy:Do you people want to see a rematch on RAW? Or do you want The Miz to pick my opponent?
[The crowd screams at that question. Hardy starts to talk.]
Hardy:Obviously I get to pick his opponent aswell.
[Hardy walks up to The Miz.]
Hardy:Well. What do you wanna do?
(Open for The Miz. I will do the colours when I get onto my computer next.)
Last edited by Jeff Hardy on 9/16/2012, 1:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/9/2012, 4:53 pm
and a bit of spell checking please
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/10/2012, 12:50 am
The Miz stares daggers into Jeff Hardy for a moment before taking a step back and holding the mic to his mouth.
Quote :
"Nero...Can I call you Nero?"
Jeff shakes his no as Miz begins to speak again.
Quote :
"Nero, there are only two positives when it comes to you- any drug test you take and any match you wrestle. So while I may not like you much I do respect you in the ring and I will fight you on RAW, I will fight you on NXT, I will fight you on SmackDown, I will fight you anytime and any where"
(Open for Hardy. Will finish it soon if he doesn't)
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/10/2012, 1:48 pm
I think that's a good place to close the promo.
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/11/2012, 8:09 pm
In that case
{Official grade}
3 SP to you Jeff. Nothing was wrong with it but it was just average. Decent formatting though.
Also, will one of the admins grade my part in this? Thanks
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/11/2012, 10:30 pm
******************************************* OFFICIAL GRADE
Miz- 4sp good overall , but not outstanding. I've seen better from you.
Side Note- In the future , When you are involved in the promo , Leave the grading to me. Technically You shouldn't be grading anything in a thread that involves you. No big , Just FYI.
Jay
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Subject: Re: The callout. 9/12/2012, 1:16 am
Badass Game wrote:
******************************************* OFFICIAL GRADE
Miz- 4sp good overall , but not outstanding. I've seen better from you.
Side Note- In the future , When you are involved in the promo , Leave the grading to me. Technically You shouldn't be grading anything in a thread that involves you. No big , Just FYI.
