Posts : 405 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2012-04-30 Age : 32 Location : Orlando, Flordia
Subject: Lets Dance 11/17/2012, 10:54 pm
Welcome to wCw Age 2 Monday Night Raw.
Video Clip Begins to Play
Ladies and Gentleman please Welcome to wCw RIKISHI!!!!
Rikishi walks down the ramp and get into the ring and begin to speak.
Hello wCw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know what Brodus Clay been doing out here but the real Dancing Maniac here, hit the Music and cut the lights.
Danny Member
Posts : 205 Reputation : 12 Join date : 2012-05-01 Age : 36 Location : ELITE
Subject: Re: Lets Dance 11/17/2012, 10:55 pm
brodus and rikishi could end up being the greatest tag team of all time, just some food for thought
Tyler Member
Posts : 832 Reputation : -33 Join date : 2012-04-11 Age : 26
Subject: Re: Lets Dance 11/17/2012, 10:59 pm
It would be fun but no thanks for now.... Have other plans with the Funkasauris
The Awesome Aristocrat wCw Assistant GM
Posts : 776 Reputation : 19 Join date : 2012-03-28 Age : 36 Location : Illinois
Subject: Re: Lets Dance 11/24/2012, 3:28 am
Jay has asked me to catch us up on RAW promo grades so here I am.
Promo was way short but I understand that this is the opening promo. I like that you took a shot at someone on the roster. Only minor problems I have with this besides length is punctuation errors. On a promo this size it doesn't affect reading comprehension too much but a paragraph with this would be tough to read and subsequently grade.
I feel like a grade school teacher lecturing about punctuation but it is what it is.
