Hello once again Burwell, I am sure you know me by now!
Let me just go ahead and award you with a 3sp for this promo and then let's hit the flaws!
Once again, some grammar errors came into effect here. They were notable with capitalization and incorrect words here and there. Give it a nice proof read next time man! It will help!
I also noticed you added movement into your dialogue. This is no problem but the way you did it was odd. May I suggest color coding it? Such as:
Tonight, I put on a match that you will all remember for months to come! AJ turns and stares into the camera, shooting a rather serious glance.
I will make sure of it!Just some helpful hints and suggestions! Overall, I liked it. Pushing AJ to be a big deal but to do that, you need the talent aspect also. If it was all promo and no challenge we would be dealing with some very easily beaten champions. I hope you end up with a secondary title as AJ. Try messaging CM Punk about some form of feud or just bug Sinister about it. Good job man.