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PostSubject: rhyno debut   rhyno debut Empty3/1/2013, 7:20 pm



(crowd cheers)

rhino:i am here to do my practice match bring any one out here

(Promo opened for anyone)
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PostSubject: Re: rhyno debut   rhyno debut Empty3/1/2013, 7:36 pm


rhyno debut Th?id=H.4967152014264003&pid=1

ryback walks down to ring the with a mean look on his face.

Ryback

if you feel like can beat me you are ridiculous.i will destroy you right here right now.
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PostSubject: Re: rhyno debut   rhyno debut Empty3/1/2013, 8:10 pm

Lets go then
(rhyno gets ready)

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PostSubject: Re: rhyno debut   rhyno debut Empty3/2/2013, 9:02 pm

Rhyno: I understand you are new so this is kinda the norm for new people to the fed, they don't know how to promo, and that's ok because we will help you and guide you to greatness.

Now what you have here as it stands is a 1/5 promo. Now my suggestion would be for the next promo is to go read a promo by, Me, Tyler, Burwell, Sandow and take some notes on things they do.

For example these are some notes you could take,

1. Formatting- How the promo is layed out, how it looks if that's simpler for you.

2. Color Coding- Helps the reader understand things better and know who's talking or what's happening.

3. Content- Basically how long the promo is, or another way to look at it is the promo's length is short but the detail is great and the point is easy to understand.

4. Grammar- Words

5. Punctuation- Periods, commas, exclamation points you get the jist.

That's about all I can think of, if you have any questions feel free to pm me or one of the other mods.

Rhyno Grade: 1/5.


Ryback: Stop replying to every post lol. A superstar does not come out twenty times a night lol.

Anyway what you have here is a very short responce with a few grammatical errors. You have been here a few weeks so I expect you to know somewhat of what a promo should look like.

If you can't think of things to do with Ryback, go into the archives and go to promo's look for some of my Ryback promo's from like December that could give you something to work offf of like a platform.

Ryback Grade: 1/5

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