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Stone Cold Steve Austin -
While this promo is formatted better than your last one , it is kind of bland and uninteresting. You need to hook people so they can't wait to see what you do next. The whole promo was hard to follow due to the lack of color and use of ( ) for names. Read some other promos and come back strong. 3 sp