Shane O Mac

Jerry: OMG Cole can it be!


Crowd: In suspense



the lights suddenly turn off when...

Jerry: OMG its shane
Cole: Shane Mcmahon to WCW?!


Crowd: Shane O Mac Shane O Mac Shane O mac!






Shane Mcmahon: Im Back Baby! and yes im better than ever. Crowd (chants) Now Now first and for all never refer to me as Vince Mcmcahon spoiled son (WHAT!) I am here to become one thing and one thing only WCW champion! (WHAT!) And when I do that I will also bring back attitude to wrestling (WHAT!) Now let me juat get this off my chest(WHAT!)I dont want anything to do with them creeps at The dark Ministry or the 1990 kilq... But if one of you team dare mess with Shane O Mac than you will feel the rath of me! (WHAT!) (shane stares in the crowd) Dont what me! Also I am the most Hardcore wrestler in this company (WHAT!) I am more hardcore than Mick Foley and Matt Hardy combined (WHAT!) Yes I said combined, Just to prove it check up on the screen (Shane points to the screen) More proof (As you can see no other man except for the spoil boss son would do these extreme things which make me the greatest hardcore wrestler of all time! (Shane starts to do his signatuare on stage)








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***OFFICIAL GRADE***

Good promo though crowd and commentary additions were lacking, you only gave the commentary team 1-2 lines and the crowd was unclear until I finally realized you added it into Shane's speech. Speaking of the speech, I loved that you added more dialogue for him, with some discrepancies in grammar, but still able to be read. 3sp