Where It All Began pt 2

On Televisions across the nation another video played.



After the video a voice is heard coming through the TV while pictures played.

???: this is where I grew up, in the ghettos of Charolette North Carolina



???: Because of poor decisions, I ended up here



???: I stayed here for 3 years wishing I hadn't made the mistake of doing what I did... after my release I decided to find a way to release my aggressions.... so I decided to join WCW and take out my aggressions on anybody in my way. No matter who it is. They will learn that the Truth hurts and Smackdown better know what's up.

after that, the TVs showed one last picture before going back to their programs.

Big improvement over the last one!

I liked the use of visuals to give the promo more of an emotional impact. Your message was short and to the point. There is still a shroud of mystery on Truth and what he is about. I'm sure once we are a month or two in, things will get very interesting for R-Truth.

Only problems were some grammar issues, and I would like to see the promos a bit more beefy in the writing department. Those will be fixed with time though.

{Official Grade}

Going to bump you up to a 3/5. Good job Jo! After seeing how lethal you are with him on '13 I really think Truth could be a real title contender.