King: OH MY GOSH COLE, Look Is The Rattle snake Stone Cold Steve Austin
Cole: What is he doing here, he's been missing for a month
Matthews: Ladies and Gentlemen please help me welcome. STONE COLD STEVE AUSTIN
Austin Begins to speak:
Austin: If you glad to see The Rattlesnake give me an Hell Yea
Crowd: Hell Yea
Austin: if you want to Stone Cold Steve Austin Kick some Ass give me an Hell Yea
Crowd: Hell Yea
Austin: I been out the past month due to a knee injury i suffered with my my tag team partner Wad Barrett, But now im back and ready to kick some redneck ass... My tag team partner Wade Barrett and i, believes that this tag team division Don't have any real competition.
Austin: You see i been watching WWE (Crowd: What) and i see that some justice needs to be serve (Crowd: What) So i am issuing out a challenge to any Body back there in that locker room, team or not to come face the rattle snake and his partner, so we can whoop your ass (Crowd: What)
Austin: and that's the bottom line because Stone Cold said so.
Well cole, There you have it, the return of the rattlesnake
OPEN FOR ANY1 TO RESPOND
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: open challenge 6/15/2012, 1:25 pm
This doesn't really qualify as a promo so I'm not going to grade it.
Sheamus Respected Member
Posts : 405 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2012-04-30 Age : 32 Location : Orlando, Flordia
Subject: Re: open challenge 6/15/2012, 2:22 pm
lOKKS GOOD TO ME
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: open challenge 6/15/2012, 2:39 pm
This promo was edited after my earlier post.
{{{OFFICIAL GRADE}}}
Looks much better. The original was just a statement not written as a promo. Revised version is...Great use of visuals. A few small grammar errors and needs color coding but a huge improvement. 3 sp
